Aj/"перемены"

зато прямо сказано
....а такое как? пусть и рифма детская и банальная, но......
i remenesce...
through all the fighting' and the ballin'
my mama, she was callin' me
but i couldn't hear her i was fallin'
straight down to the ground,
but till' my body was found
my ears could hear it for years
the track called "funeral sound"
around me... but now i'm buried
and i passed with the time,
but still the story is mine
n' i hope it's worth of a dime,
n' i hope i did any good
instead of makin' some crime
i tryed to be understood,
but they told me "maybe next time"...
maybe what? i get free?
or i avoid the penitentiary?
not like my brothers and sisters
that were so unlucky to be...
they never reached to the freedom
but I do hope that I will...
'cause I'm a natural leader
and so I'm god-blessed to deal
with all the realest niggaz
that mean a thing in this world,
they rule it all with their fingers
for them we're diggers to hold...
but I ain't trying' to be bold,
I'm tryin' to be what i am,
it's just that i'm feelin' so cold
among my old buddy-friends...
and so i'm changing the trend
to where i lead with my life,
it's just i'm tryin' to get high
or while been tryin' to die...
and there's no place for surrender,
i'm not gonna yield for discretion...
i finally got to tender
my bills, I'm sick with compassion.
my session's over, I'm free now,
whether the favour's not with me.
each other life has its meaning
but my has only its reason...
[chorus]
you best to find your own reason
and live your life like you should,
it's not a game to be easy
and even less to be good...
but if you wanna be something
there's somthing you gotta do,
don't let your faith to start bumpin'
and find the way to be true...
i never played a lotto
but never messed with a chance
to get my spirit enhanced
n' i tryed to be a good friend
to all my homies in trouble
and all my closest in need,
when they were bound to be humbled
i'm proud of all that i did,
though I was not interested
in appreciation to get...
sometimes I even get despered
'cause I was an obedient pet...
you know, it feels kinda lonely
when I analyse those I know.
'cause most of them is so phoney
that friendship's gone with the blow...
it shows me how I was stupid
believin' all they were saying,
thay had me like kinda dupy
but now thay're gone and I'm staying...
'cause that's the thing to be learned
that bein' seeming is worthless,
no matter what you can turn
the truth appears on the surface...
it was just another life-lesson,
you know i had'em so plenty
that not anymore they can stress me
though i'm still under my twenty...
I'm educated enough
to carry on full in safe
and it ain't no more so tough
to make out things carrying weight,
aviod what's bein' overrated,
I fuck those tryin' to squeeze me,
so tyred of bein' frustrated
I managed to find my reasons...
[chorus]
so, what's the main i understand
from being critisized,
be a man and go tend
to being fantasized
'bout all your dreams and your wishes
that you've been hidin' a long,
let all your hidden ambitions
carry you out to be strong
and hold on,
and get yourself to rely,
bring all the clarity gone
into the values of life,
and bring the trust to the people,
'cause being distrustin' we'll fail...
our fortune's comin' in ripples,
so make the highest tide stay.
no matter if it looks crazy
i know we're walkin' in haze
n' it's being harder and harder
to step on day after day...
'cause when a man with a crime
becomes a minister prime,
then what's that shit that we live?
it's not even worth of a rhyme...
but what if we have no choice
and other life to be lived?
listen to your inner voice
and follow what you believe...
and if you need me, i'm close,
i'm in around like a ghost,
and you can feel me, i'm real,
it's just that i've changed up my host,
but we can fight it together,
we'll brake it through to the end,
find all the things really matter
if you go down or go stand...
that can define your existing
and show you why are you breathin'...
until the world came to blisper
you best to find you own reason...
[chorus]
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